Postive and Negative feedback

After getting together all our shots , we started to edit them on final cut pro, whilst doing that we reaslised we didnt have enough shots, we also didnt sing the whole song all the way through and also sang parts of the song leaving us with very few camera shots. When putting them on the time line we started of with scenes in the park then moved to the green screen then back again, when are teacher came to view our video she said this wasnt a good idea as in every video whilst singing a chrous it dosent cut to another scene. Looking back on this we then reaslised that we had to film more shots using that advise that we were given . We where also told to bring in Feelando earlier in the video as it would be confusing if you were just to see him towards the end although the lyrics tell the story. As we had a lot of editing to do because we thought it would be better to start again. After gathering all our shots for the second time we found out that it was alot easier as it started to come along. We then started to put it onto a timeline and added transitions, once our teacher looked at it for a second time , the feedback she gave was positive.